I have to do it
I must push through this
Will strong as stone a defender guarding gates
A quick-lipped fast quip
Equipped with the reaction of disease
As the sun goes down and sets its pink filter on the brewing storm
Our shadows touch a revolving fight
As we’re pieces you’ve set down as pawns
To hide your betrayal’s reveal
But the sky won’t meet the ocean today
For the people you take full advantage of are forever broken
Hearts you steal for yourself
Keep them close so they cannot heal
And you can think of me while you have the time of your life
Because I can’t be the only one who got the bad end of the deal
Left empty-handed there is no remedy for what you’re demanding
These feelings aren’t lonely they are spoken by everyone
And when it comes undone you’re the one with blood-drenched hands, unclean
Written by Baz
25 May 2009
Great work ! I especially liked the flow and the last 4 lines.. my favorite is ‘These feelings aren’t lonely they are spoken by everyone’
Keep posting.
Success,
Jerry.
Thank you very much!!
Magnetic poetry – captivating read.
simply marvellous.
Really? I didn’t think it was that good.
Dont think.. just keep posting ..
Hahaha, I will put some of my old ones up while I figure out what to write about.